We are builders –
constructing isolation
with fortified walls
imagining security
in separation.
We are battlers –
projecting foes
in outer forces
ignoring the dangers
of faulty foundations.
How warped are the stories
on which we lay our floors;
how misguided our efforts?
We need level ground
on which to erect stability,
a balanced understanding
cemented in commitment,
a universal, master plan
motivated by communal
accessibility, developed
with careful consideration.
Alas, we are consumers –
trusting the blueprints
of those whose architectural
designs are self-serving.
What price will we pay
for residing in a house
dangerously slanted
towards destruction?
I really enjoyed this, especially the first stanza.
We are builders –
constructing isolation
with fortified walls
imagining security
in separation.
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Thank you, Ali. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Very powerful. I stand in wonder on most days of teaching in a public school and am amazed how our children are able to withstand the foundations that they are given at the age of 10.
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Kids are so resilient, aren’t they?
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Love the last verse. It says it all. When will the world wake up.
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Impossible to say. Thanks for dropping by.
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well crafted commentary on the general state of society.
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Thank you. Wonder if we will ever really re-evaluate our values and enact the changes?
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I am an optimist…so on day to day living, I often do see things that keeps me hopeful..but when I listen to politicians and those with power, sadly, I’m a little more skeptical.
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I agree. It’s mostly what’s happening top down.
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