No click-clack of heels –
a fading echo marking retreat
no lingering exhaust fumes,
or squeal of escaping tires
no white trails marking
passage of airplane wings
just a sudden absence
of words, a lapsed date
lets you know I am gone
No click-clack of heels –
a fading echo marking retreat
no lingering exhaust fumes,
or squeal of escaping tires
no white trails marking
passage of airplane wings
just a sudden absence
of words, a lapsed date
lets you know I am gone
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Really like this one, has spareness and universality, it sits back and lets the images do the work .
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Thank you! It has been working its way around my brain for days.
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Oops hit enter too early lol. I wanted to add that I like the quiet, dignified, drama-free approach. Not flouncing off with a “harrumph” or a big show, just dropping off their radar. Very nice and simple; I don’t just like it, I love it! π
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Ahhh – made my day!
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Sweet! πβ€οΈβ€οΈ. So happy πππ
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This struck me this morning π I really like it ππ
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Thanks, Laina. I have been away from the computer, and was thinking of what that absence must look like. It turned out rather eerie, I think.
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That’s a really cool “springboard” – and what a beautiful way of expressing it ππ
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