Are we awake
barely breathing?
Mounting raucous
shattering sensibility
Hatred building
rights withering
Who will survive?
I, chirps
the solo bloom
Timid-voiced
overlooked
radiant in her fragility
confident
Breathe
(Art my own)
Are we awake
barely breathing?
Mounting raucous
shattering sensibility
Hatred building
rights withering
Who will survive?
I, chirps
the solo bloom
Timid-voiced
overlooked
radiant in her fragility
confident
Breathe
(Art my own)
Small but mighty.
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Indeed!
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I love your art and your words. I needed this nudge. Thank you, VJ.
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So welcome, Eugi
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A beautifully thoughtful and reflective piece. Your words invite the reader to pause, feel, and look a little deeper. Thank you for sharing. ✨
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Thanks for your wonderful comment
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We just need to believe in ourselves, don’t we? Love this.🙂
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Yes. Thank you
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Lest we forget breathing! Such a timely, hope inspiring verse, VJ. Love the artwork. ❤️
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Thank you
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My pleasure, VJ.
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A beautiful and inspiring poem VJ
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Thanks Sadje
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My pleasure
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What a breathtaking and deeply comforting piece, VJ! In a world that often feels overwhelmed by noise and strife, the imagery of a quiet solo bloom whispering ‘Breathe’ is such a powerful reminder of inner strength. I completely agreed with Liz Gauffreau that this poem is wonderfully life-affirming, and like Aptivi noted, your hand-drawn flower illustration is absolutely stunning! Thank you for sharing such a gentle gift of hope today.
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment
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gorgeous VJ! 💜💜
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Thanks so much
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What a very lovely poem, VJ! And you’ve drawn the flower really great! 👍☺️
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Thank you!
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My pleasure! ☺️
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I LOVE this life-affirming poem!
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Thanks so much Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ!
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