Exposed are we,
voyageurs crossing
this great expanse-
One tiny vessel
bearing life’s weight,
two oars to navigate
Unknown depths below
and shadows murky –
we push on. Row. Row.
Sights set on new land
uncharted possibilities –
pray the crossing favours us
Then a shape emerges –
great hulking mass –
parting waters,
rising and transforming
Is this a caricature of our fear?
I am mesmerized,
project a divine presence
look for mystical signs
He shrugs,
pragmatically notes that
the St Lawrence is home
to such mammals
I dream of whales,
crave communion –
yearn for their certainty
their knowing
Just as I wait for a sign
from the departed –
inviting a simpler life,
inspiring hope…
A shore life,
from which I can observe
the numinous.
(Image my own. This is a rewrite of an earlier post)
HI VJ, this is a lovely poem. I enjoyed it very much.
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Thank you!
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It’s beautiful how you weaved life if one chooses to be himself. Fabulous read.
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Thanks so much!
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Happy Sunday VJ : )
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A beautiful mix of realities, and a new word for me. The poem is a treat.
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Thank you!
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A beautiful image, and your verses go well with this. Thank you!
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Thank you!
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🙏💐
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Lookinng for mystical signs! They look so magical
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😊
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Quite lovely, VJ.
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Thanks LuAnne
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sounds fit for a Harry Potter scene 🙂
Sorry you couldn’t see much but you sure captured the anticipation 🙂
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Thank Kate
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beautiful! A wonderful metaphor for our life journey. And yes, those whales and whalesong from the deep, I hear them too.
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Thanks Deborah and fellow whale dreamer 💕
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Oh…..”caricature of our fear”. Wow! 💕
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😊🙏
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Always looking for signs. This is wonderful way—you’re ready to invite the grace in. Love everything in this post. That’s VJ. 🤗
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What a wonderful take, Selma. Thank you!
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Such a beautiful way of looking at the ocean as a vessel and the questions that arise… love this VJ💗
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Thanks Cindy
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You’re most welcome VJ❣️
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I’ve never seen a whale in person, but their songs are haunting–like a language which surpasses understanding. I do think we turn to symbols when words fail. (K)
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Their presence is the same. So awe-inspiring. Thanks.
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It reminds me of my visits (and I did live there a short time) in Alaska. And I just love hearing them!
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Oh yes! Incredible to see.
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A beautiful -poem somewhat dream like for me and Love the illustrations.
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Thank you, Janet.
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I love this poem. It is very peaceful, and hopeful. I did commune with a whale once. I asked the universe to bring me one on a whale watching trip. It was undeniable that he came over to the boat to talk to me. VERY numinous. 🙂
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That is so cool! Considering how long whales have been on this earth and evolved is just incredible. Numinous is a good word.
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A very evocative poem VJ 🫶🏼
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Thank you, Sadje
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You’re most welcome my friend
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Such a contemplative flow to this poem. It left me now thinking about how I am often looking for signs or wondering about the deeper meaning of what I interpret as a sign.
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It keeps the mystery alive, doesn’t it?
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Most definitely.
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🥰
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A wonderful dream …
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Thanks, Ivor
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You’re welcome, VJ
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