Essence is essence
and flat as I might feel
shadow reveals otherwise;
such is the mystery of life
Orange is my essence –
the promise of sunshine
and creativity, and… I envy
blue its expansiveness
Constrained as I am
by conformity –
this silver-framed
existence a settling
But shadows don’t settle
they stretch and bend
and exclaim rebellion
savagely defending essence.
(Slanted Orange was written in 2022 as a collaborative effort with a local photographer. The efforts of our poetry group are published in a book called the Minimalist Eye. Click here to see the whole collection as well as the photographs that inspired each poem. I’ve used my own art for this post.)
Rebel shadows. Yeah. I think you’re right. Lovely reading. I love your voice. And the poem. Xoxo
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Thank you!
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Lovely poem. 😍
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Thank you!
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You’re most welcome.
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I like your “silver framed existence.” It seems constricting but pretty and shiny at the same time.
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Oh, I like your interpretation. Thank you
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This is great VJ!
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Thank you
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VJ, this is so good – “Orange is my essence – the promise of sunshine and creativity,”
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Thanks 🥰
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love this, VJ and your last stanza so good
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“But shadows don’t settle
they stretch and bend
and exclaim rebellion
savagely defending essence.”
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Thanks Cindy!
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you
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That’s a great collection–the photos are so vivid.
Yes, we need those shadows. (K)
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Thanks K. It was a fun, but challenging project.
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Interesting how the poem changes context with the photograph! I think that’s where personal interpretation comes in.
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Yes. I wondered if it would stand alone. Thanks Eilene
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I love the message of this poem!
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Thanks Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Adorably told, VJ. You write with grace.
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Thank you
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Welcome most.
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Hey VJ, this is a beautiful poem! I loved your reading of it too!
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Thanks so much!
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I love the opening stanza and how it leads into the fact that there are so many nuances to our existence, our shadows have dimension!
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“Orange is my essence”…wow and wow. 🥰
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Very poignant.
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Thank you, I.V.
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You’re welcome.
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A lovely poem.
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Thank you!
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Most welcome
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I enjoyed both your poems, VJ. The idea of an abstract photo prompt and the resulting book of poetry is a interesting creative turn. Thanks for sharing on this wintery? morning.
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Thanks Sarah. Certainly wintry here.
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“this silver-framed
existence”
Love it VJ 😀
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Thanks Brian
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