Ice has blown in overnight
tree branches coated,
sparkling…
… I search for a word
evasive, my fogged brain
having released so many
to the void…
“Varnish?” I ask aloud
“What’s that?” comes an answer
my son-in-law always helpful
spies my hand on butcher block
“Do you mean the finish on the wood?
That’s varnish, yes.”
“No.” I bite my trembling lip.
Indicate the scene outside the window,
the tree with its new shiny coat
“Like varnish!” he exclaims
“That works.”
“Nature’s varnish!” I proclaim
Creativity –
a sometimes bi-product
of a faulty mind.
(Image my own)
Beautiful writing.
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Thank you!
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I love ‘Nature’s varnish’ VJ. Wonderful poem!
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Thanks so much, Lauren
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The image is lovely, and I agree, the forgiveness of our mind can add to the creativity!
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😊💕
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I had visited a hill station close to the Himalayas so I had experienced it there. I just couldn’t describe it back then while journaling since it was my first time and I had never experienced it before . Once you described it in this post, it felt like it all fell into place in my head.
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I love that. Thanks for sharing.
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The whole analogy is actually on point. I agree with this post 😊
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You’ve experienced it too?
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Fantastic!
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I love it! 😀
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Thanks Liz
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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I could use some of that varnish VJ❣️
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😁😘
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“Nature’s varnish!” – yes, love this! A new description for when we have a Texas ice storm!!!
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Yes! I’ve been there for those. Fits perfectly
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This Novel is so interesting. Anita
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Thanks Anita
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Cheers to faults and fresh snow-packed perspectives.
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Thanks!
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VJ, your last lines remind me of a quote that beauty is more often found in a cracked pot, than a whole one. I don’t remember who said it.
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I don’t know either but I certainly resemble that remark 🤣
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💜
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😘
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A novel idea.
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Thanks Sadje
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You’re always welcome 🙏🏼
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My faulty mind has slowed down to a snail’s pace,
but no matter, in my space, I slither with grace
and everyone else is running in the wrong race
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Oh, I love it, Ivor.
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One of those anecdotes I write on the spot and I think I’ll develop it into a poem 😊🌏
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Yes. It works
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Thanks VJ
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