Pockets of light
illuminate the shore –
day submitting to dark
I trace the lines
of our passage,
remembering
How winds and tides
shaped us, how carelessly
we wasted time…
Danced around
our solitudes
imitating intimacy
(Once upon a time I wrote poetry for Twitter. This is one. Image my own)
Loving the poem and the artwork!
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Thanks so much
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Love the art work! That last stanza is wonderful.
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Thank you!
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Love this. Those last lines, wow!
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Thanks Deborah!
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Oh, how we imitated intimacy in our youth. Love this post, VJ.
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Right?! I remember Love Story was the big movie just as I was yearning for love, lol.
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This is an poem. This brilliant and bright image. Anita
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Thank you Anita
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So carelessly…(K)
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🥰
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And you can see, technology is not my forte
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Lol. Right there with you, Mary.
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Beautiful poetry and art. I am learning to paint with words and speak with a brush. For me, the brush is harder but I am no quitter.
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Beautiful poetry and art. I paint with words and am learning to speak with a brush. For me, the brush is much harder but I am no quitter.
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Oh yes. Don’t give up. It takes a while, but we find our voice
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Lovely poetry, VJ. Reminding me about my own once upon a time part of life 🙂
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Thanks Hammad
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I love both the poem and image. I really like how you see the landscape – the colours, the reflections, all of it!
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Thank you!
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I really like this one and can relate….Thank you, VJ
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🙏🥰
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A beautiful poem and image
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Thank you, Sadje
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You’re welcome ☺️
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VJ you are so talented at combining images with the verses.
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Thanks Lou.
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Exactly my thought, Lou!
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😊
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So beautiful, V, 🤩. And glorious image. Wow! 👏🏽
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Thank you Selma
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“…how carelessly we wasted time…”
Straight to the heart this morning, VJ. Thank you. 💕
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😊🥰
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A hint of regret, but not overpowering. Lovely poem.
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More just a comment on life and love and limitations. Thanks Heather
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Welcome.
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🧡🧡
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😊💕
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Beautiful poem and image. Each stanza so well crafted and the whole flows together elegantly. I remember those imitated intimacies.i
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Thanks so much Sarah.
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