Biting, the sun’s brilliance,
nestled in a cornflower blue sky –
competition for mustard gold,
tangerine orange, and chartreuse –
leaves shimmering this Autumn morn
The vividness of colours too sharp
for just awakened eyes – begs retreat.
I contemplate this vision, think:
life is like this –
too beautiful, at times for words;
glorious perfection.
In a blink, the sky changes
white clouds forming a backdrop,
Autumn wind tossing the tree about,
branches dipping, pull apart,
and the harmony of the last moment
is gone, and I think:
Life is like this –
turning without notice,
what once was balance, suddenly lost,
and we are left spinning.
I can hear it now – wind rushing
against the windowpane, taunting:
Change! Change is coming!
I know what it speaks is true, for
life is like this: ever fluctuating, and
the reminder is bittersweet,
my heart, reluctant to let go of Summer
knows it’s okay: it’s just the way of life.
(A rewrite of a rewrite. Image my own)
Absolutely beautiful friend
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Hello and thank you for stopping by.
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Hi friend, no problem. Love your writing.
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i honestly love this poem i feel like when you think deep about life can seem so simple yet so complicated at the same time i feel like that’s one reason why it can be so hard to explain it. i feel like in this poem you describe some things so simple yet so beautiful actions and instances that just pass with the blink of an eye. when i sit outside sometimes i just really take the time to embrace the sights the sights i see everyday yet just as beautiful this poem reminds me of those times
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Thank you!
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Love this one, VJ. I know the spinning feeling.
Love the tree!
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Thank you!
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❤️💕❤️
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I love the repeat and knowingness of your poem VJ so wise but the letting go isn’t always easy. xo 💕
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No, it is not. Thanks Cindy
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Gorgeous painting! And your poem really struck home. I too always lament summer’s passing, but less this year than others.
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Thanks Deborah.
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Beautiful, and keep rewriting, that keeps a poem alive.
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Thanks Adam.
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such awesome words and art to describe the magic of your autumn … something we don’t really see living so close to the equator
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Thanks Kate. Weather can be a pain, but there is beauty to behold.
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absolutely, that transformation into such warm russet colours intrigues me 🙂
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That’s a wonderful tree.
No notice at all. Always surprising. (K)
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Thanks K
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It all comes around again.
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It does!
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Isn’t autumn so wonderful about reminding us of change? I enjoyed this timely poem so much this evening, VJ. The image is wonderful. Do you see eyes in it? I do.
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I do now! thanks!
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This is such an insightful poem! Thank you for writing it. I love the image, too.
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Nice poem. Beautiful image.
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Thank you
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Lovely thoughts and words.
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Thank you
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A really beautiful combination of sound poem and glittering painting
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Thanks Derrick
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So beautiful!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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Gorgeous art! And how right you are – the only constant is change.
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Thanks Lynne
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Your artworks always complement beautifully
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Thank you!
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Beautiful watercolour and lovely poem. Constant change.
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Thanks Janet
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Wonderful poem, VJ. I love how the perspective changes on the phrase “life is like this”, and so true. Your artwork is amazing.
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Thank you, Sarah
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Ohhhh….”too beautiful for words”. That perfectly describes the reaction I had upon seeing your stunning artwork in this post, VJ. 💕
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Thanks so much, Victoria!
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💕💕💕
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I love this poem and it’s poignant reminder VJ
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Thank you, Sadje
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Most welcome my friend
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Lovely poem, VJ! ❤️
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Thank you, Nadine
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You are very welcome! ❤️ 💙 💜 💖
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And as the saying goes… the Only constant is Change.. 😅
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Amen to that!
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😍😍😍
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Excellent imagery!
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Thanks Todd!
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love this Vj! Wonderful poetry my friend! ❤
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Thanks so much!
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