Cheer growth –
beneath a heavy cloud cover
Canada goose passes
overhead, while I
wander
Wander –
behind a veil of rainy grey
lens poised to capture life –
swallows swoop and
rise up
Rise up –
over rushing waters, branch high,
blackbirds huddle, demand
my attention –
focus
Focus –
reveals newness: buds breaking through,
colours promising that
chilly winds disperse,
cheer growth
Cheer growth –
behind a veil of rainy grey
blackbirds huddle, demand
chilly winds disperse –
cheer growth.
(Cheer for Spring first appeared here April 2019, and is a Garland cinquain. Image my own)
I love the cadence of this piece, VJ!
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Thanks Susi!
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Beautiful. Cheer growth.
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thanks Indira
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A very thought provoking poem and lovely piece of art!
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Thank you!
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A stunning image and I love your uplifting garland cinquain. Blackbirds are good predictors. đ
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They are, aren’t they! Thanks Eugi!
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Most welcome!
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Lovely, uplifting poem. I always enjoy hearing you read your work, VJ.
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Thank you.
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All my pleasure. đ
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Beautiful words and superb image:)
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Thank you Janet
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I love how life-affirming and hopeful this poem is! I also appreciate the accompanying unusual image.
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Thanks Liz. Every once in a while, I pop one out, lol
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You’re welcome, VJ. đ
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I like this Garland cinquain. This poem lifts my spirits…so much hope. I found some more hope for spring this morning. Last fall I brought in an ivy and I had some petunias mixed in and they were still flowering. One of the petunias has held on all winter, although rather straggly and today I noticed a flower almost ready to open!! I’ve never had a petunia overwinter before.
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Wow! That is amazing. Feels like a positive sign from Mother Nature herself.
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That was my thought, too.
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Thank you
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Thank you!
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I can actually see small patches of earth, here and there, sneaking up through snow. Fine work VJ. Thanks. And: Cheers!
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I really love this poem, VJ. And the image glows! ~ Susan
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Thanks Susan
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This is the first time I have encountered a garland cinquain. I really like this form, I must try it! Your post opened doors for me today, VJ, so thank you. I searched the cinquain term, and found this useful page: https://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/example-index/
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I’m glad it inspired you. It’s fun to stretch ourselves. This was my first attempt.
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