The river will not be pushed
nor outrun – still I try
shattered pieces of my efforts
littering her banks…
Illness teaches that I cannot
flow with or keep up, but…
openness counts…the river
brings and she takes away
I am witness, beneficiary,
a voice, for her bounty, her power
Life is the river. It brings opportunity-
I partake or not; it moves on.
No use building walls; better to stand
at the edge with heart and mind willing.
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👂🏻 HI SISTERS! TODAY WE’VE GOT NOT ONLY A GREAT WORK. WE ALSO CAN READ THESE WONDERFUL WORDS AND LISTEN THAT SUGGESTING AND NICE VOICE.
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Thanks so much!
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You’re so welcome. The merit is yours and you deserved a good sharing. Congrats! 💟
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Beautiful and empowering VJ!
Such lovely gifts of the river in your poem❣️
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She’s always giving. Thanks Cindy.
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Beautifully penned
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Thank you
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Beautiful piece and love the last 2 lines.
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Thank you
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Most welcome, VJ.
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I really like how you’ve used the river metaphor.
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Thank you, Liz.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Love the last lines, VJ! Beautiful photo 💙
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Thanks Lisa!
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…openness counts…heart and mind willing…so very true.
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The parallels are striking, and the wisdom of rivers profound, love that last line.
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Thanks Paul.
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Most welcome VJ
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I love the way your words flow, in your own river. I think of life in a similar way
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Thank you.
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome VJ
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Thank you, VJ. Yes.
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😊
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Thank you for sharing this, VJ. Wishing you a lovely weekend 🙂
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Thanks Hammad. You too!
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