One more train
and she’d be away
far enough
to lose him
Scavenged in her bag
searching for a ticket
and courage…
could use a dose of courage
Thought of her mother
how torn up she’d be;
of her sister, confined
to long-term care
Call for boarding
and a decision –
neck smarting from
last confrontation
He wielded his hands
like weapons. his words
like knives – her heart
a mass of bruises
What choice did she have?
Surely staying meant death,
but could she run forever?
Rage found new footing
Picked up her bag
hustled out of the station
Why should one man destroy her –
She needed a better strategy.
(Image my own)
Run girl Run!!!!!!!
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Don’t know how I missed this. Glad I found it. Perfectly portrayed. Thanks.
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Thanks Ron.
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A well crafted and intense piece about a life situation that unfolds far too often.
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Thanks Mark and I agree – too often
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This hits hard in real life. Well done, VJ.
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Thanks Eugi.
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Most welcome.
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this last line… “Rage found new footing” 💗
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Sometimes a good thing…sometimes not.
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So true💕
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I agree, “one day women will have a viable alternative”, especially for young women.
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Sure hope so. Thanks Amy.
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This was a tough one. I was holding my breath as I read it.
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It is a tough and really leaves the ending open. Hopefully one day women will have a viable alternative.
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I certainly hope so.
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a compelling piece
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😊
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🙏🏼👍🏼
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