He fills the home
with sweetness –
serenades their love –
while she picks away
at every gesture,
imagining subterfuge
His floral words
only serve to poke
doubts – she reads
between the lines
of ornamental landmines
He lights candles
to set a mood,
but she is already
planning a funeral –
her wrung out heart
unwilling to fall.
So sad when this happens. But you can’t make somebody love you if they won’t.
Am I on the right site or did your re-do your site? I like it!
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I updated my site for a new year. Thanks.
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The mix of love and grief clutches my throat, one must be part of the other, but yet can it not be? No, but to live in the moment and not the beginning or the ending, just in the love of now while carrying the memory. Such deep love in the midst of pain.
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Thanks Paul. It really is a portrait of how we sabotage what is before us.
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Yes, so well written to that effect.
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Sad.
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It is, truly.
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Such a sad scene .But so well written VJ.
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Thanks Anne
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Oh, what an awful way to live . . .
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Indeed.
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Oh yes….you paint an ominous picture with brilliant words.
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Thanks Janet.
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Definitely chilling – image suits!
Leaves me feeling darn lucky.
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Thanks Jazz.
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Bummer, well told.
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Thanks Ron.
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