She flows
unapologetic of her girth,
does not flinch
at barges scoring her surface
nor paddle boats laden with curiosity.
Confident in her fluidity,
she bears the secrets of life –
the sludge of humanity in her belly –
stirs the minds of merchants, and children,
tolerates those who gather at her banks.
The final word is hers – she knows –
no boundaries can contain her wrath
still waters rise and spill;
she is a dragon
Nature’s force,
and she is magnificent.
(‘Mississippi’ first appeared here in November, 2017.
Image my own. Not the Mississippi.)
Great reading! Wow this part and image:
“Confident in her fluidity,
she bears the secrets of life β
the sludge of humanity in her belly”
Another poem which shows of your amazing use of language. You got the touch!
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You are sweet. Thanks.
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Welcome! Keep turning out this great stuff! Have a great weekend!
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You too!
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Loved this.β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thanks π
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beautiful! Vj! Thats an amazing piece! Loved the audio also! π
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Thank you, my friend.
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Wonderful description of this mighty river. I lived near her shores, crossed her every week day for a year, living in Memphis and working in Arkansas. Calling her a dragon is so apt. I never once stepped into her waters full of eddies. I had a great respect for her waters. Once Memphis had a recreational spot called Mud Island that was in the Mississippi. It had a to-scale replica of the river that the kids (and me!) loved to splash in. It was a mile long and indicated all the cities along the river. Oh, good times. Thanks for ‘stirring’ the memories, VJ.
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Brilliant. Thank you
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I/ve visited the Mississippi River many times and you described her to a tee. Your image is stunning.
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Thanks Eugi
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Most welcome, VJ.
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A tribute to so many rivers, VJ. I love the words and you reading it
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Thanks.
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Your poem is magnificent, VJ. Love hearing your voice. ππ»
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Thanks Michele
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I should also have mentioned how nice it is to hear you speak this poem. It is always a treat to hear the creator of written work deliver their own inflections and nuances to it. Thank you.
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Thank you!
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This is a strong piece. This river has such power and grace and you have captured both.
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Thanks Anne
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Captiving words VJ and your Spoken word was… Well outstanding! All aspects of this post delight… Your words, your phone and your voice πππππππππππ
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Thanks so much!
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For someone who has never visited the Mississippi, but have often counted it, you create an incredible image!
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Lol…I’ve counted it often too. Thanks
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lol! You’re welcome!
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Indeed, a dragon who may be complacent for long stretches but never tamed!
For visiting, I prefer her gurgling headwaters to that massive mouth.
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It’s all engrossing. Thanks Jazz.
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And your poem is magnificent – what a tribute!
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Thanks so much
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I’ve stood on her banks. You write her perfectly. Thanks for the reminder.
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Thanks Ron
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This is so powerful, VJ. The image is also beautiful. Will listen to the reading, once I’m back home.
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Thanks V.
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I love everything about this poem and your reading of it! Such a grand metaphor!!
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Thanks so much, Liz.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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