I was the sun
you the moon
till she came
and somehow
you believed
in the syzygy
of three –
Were we sheep
the earth woman
and I, accepting
shoddy alibis
hearts eclipsed
minds sealed by
lunacy of desire?
(Image my own)
I was the sun
you the moon
till she came
and somehow
you believed
in the syzygy
of three –
Were we sheep
the earth woman
and I, accepting
shoddy alibis
hearts eclipsed
minds sealed by
lunacy of desire?
(Image my own)
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Ooh! Stunning work!
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Thanks
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Welcome (always)!!!
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Yeah, count me in for ouch, as well!
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Counted!
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I’m with Derrick. Ouch.
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Lol. Yep.
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I love the word syzygy! I used it myself the other day in a free write. Your use of it is apt: the syzygy of three. It’s hard to day which of the three is having the most fun though! 🙂
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Lol. Thanks.
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uh-oh lol
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Ouch
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Exactly. Others have commented compliments but this is a thorny subject.
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Nice ✨
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Thanks Paula
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