Here’s a boy, tender
and raw, heart exposed
awkward innocence
blocking intention
Here’s a man, fiery
eyes, hands coarse,
face leather, smoky
words coaxing affection
Here’s a girl, book smart
heart uncertain, romance
a fluttery desire, caught
between the two, torn
The boy averts his eyes
fears she’ll see the raging
in his loins, read obsession
in his longing, reject him
The man takes her hand,
softly traces the outline
of her face, slow, seductive
draws her into his mystery
She is a two-headed lamb
ponders the breadth of
the boy’s shoulders, knows
his future is a srtaight line
Hormones raging at man’s
touch, the way his eyes
devour her, the magical
nuances in his voice
Two paths, she thinks
two diverging outcomes;
the boy holds himself erect
feels his fate is decided
The man lays his head
in her lap, thick waves
of black thrilling her –
a dead-end street
Is it pride that makes
the boy look away, she
wonders, or am I not
good enough, tainted?
She turns to the older
man, smiles, pull him
to her and surrenders,
darkness a familiar place.
(Decided to resurrect this old poem for Eugi’s Weekly Prompt: romance. Image my own.)
Damn. Feels a familiar story tbh, and I’m quite sure it is one for many. Beautifully rendered here. Painful but fairly (and/or unfairly) universal truths.
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For sure. What did we know of love in those tender years.
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We really, really didn’t exactly know, did we? But life taught us about lust early enough… mainly that of other people, it sometimes seemed to me…
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Very powerful and almost jarring poem in places. Fraught with strong emotions.
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Thank you Eilene.
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That last line! Painful, powerful… beautifully evocative, stirring something deep.
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Yes. Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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This was painful to read. Very, very powerful.
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Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, V.J.
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This is such a strong poem. It certainly drew me in!
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Thanks Anne.
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Oh my. This is powerful imagery. Beautiful photo (painting?) too.
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Photo art. Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Wow! Sensual and intriguing and the title is perfect. Your piece seems like an except from a novel where there is more to the story. Brava!
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Thanks Eugi. I’m working on the book.
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Wow……I would need to read this several times over a period of time, but my initial gut reaction is strong.
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Thanks Janet. The revelation in writing it punched me too.
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