I’m gnawing on possibility
the suggestion that my dabbling
could amount to something
What? my gut protests
reminds me of limitations
physical constraints
But I’ve had room to breathe
and resources at hand
and creativity, expansive
dwells in possibility
nibbles at suggestions
mind scrabbles to find
excuses – laundry,
a drawer that needs sorting
but the door has opened
and I’m seeing a path
a way through the noise
a sliver of light beckoning.
(For Ragtag’s daily prompt: gnaw. Image my own.)
It’s remarkable how certain poems have the power to change the course of one’s day – and send ripple effects of hope through the rest… This is one of those poems! Very moving, life affirming!
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Isha, this is the best response ever! Thank you.
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Absolutely my pleasure!
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We always find excuses! Gnawing and nibbles have to give way to something more substantial. Love this…so relatable.
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Thanks so much!
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My pleasure.
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Wonderfully encouraging, VJ!
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Thanks Eugi
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My pleasure, VJ!
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Go for it! The gnawing will always be there and so will the laundry. Grab that sliver of light and run!
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Thanks Susanne!
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Love your poem that takes the reader through relatable emotions and hesitations, and offers hope and possibility. π
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Thanks Michele
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I say leave off the gnawing and take a big bite; take several big bites!
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Might be about time, lol.
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Go for it! π
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I love this one! The gnawing and the nibbling but then…ah…the laundry! Such is life.
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Lol. Thanks Anne!
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Oh, I adore this one… though it’s hard to imagine that you wouldn’t imagine your work would amount to something… form and way with words always so elegant.
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Ah, thanks Lia.
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I love the opening line! It speaks of enthusiasm, energy…I can just see the possibilities swirling in your mind and that feeling of chomping at the bit to get going! The trick is not letting all the other stuff get in the way!
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It sure is. Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Do you mean your writing or painting?
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Writing moreso.
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Pick up the 2021 Writer’s Market and go for it!
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Thanks Mike.
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Wonderfully optimistic! “but the door has opened” – what a mantra for a new day!
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Thanks Lynne!
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