Poet’s mind fragile
images ripe, words lacking
waste of genius
shadows whisper of bathos –
a rewrite is imminent.
(Image mine)
Poet’s mind fragile
images ripe, words lacking
waste of genius
shadows whisper of bathos –
a rewrite is imminent.
(Image mine)
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Your poem is a perfect depiction of my writing process. Those shadows do have a way of mocking my words.
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Seriously…there should be an off switch.
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thanks for a new word, you wove the meaning into this poem so artistically!
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Thanks Kate.
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It is so ironic that I just came to your site and read your post. I was thinking earlier today that I have so many ideas, I just need to put them in writing. But when it comes to it I draw a blank. Then I read you writing and it was like you read my mind, You put it in words perfectly.
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Thanks. Good to know I am not alone in the frustration.
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Some of the beauty of keeping touch with people here. You sort of get to know each other and see insights that are really helpful especially while being so unsocial than we are used to.
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True. I was bedbound for three years and this community kept me going.
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Oh my, that must have taken a lot of emotional strength. Good for you for sticking through things and sounding so positive now.
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Thanks. No shortage of determination here, lol
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The emotion comes through in your poem! The struggle of the artist/poet.
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Thanks so much Sue.
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You summed it up in so few words, and captured the angst of an artist.
I’ve been having trouble with WordPress lately, and I don’t see an image, was that purposeful or just me?
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No, it’s not you. Apparently my image didn’t upload. Thanks.
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That’s poetry, to be able to use words like this effortlessly: “bathos “. This one is really interesting! This sums up the struggle of a writer: “Images ripe, words lacking”.
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Thanks Benjamin. I confess, I have to look many words up and then look them up again, as I suffer from inflammation on the brain. Makes me question everything.
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Well, you always seem to find the right words. Doesn’t matter how you get there!
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Bless you!
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