Novel on Hold

VJ Knutsonart, creativity, expression, memoir, poetry, writingnovel, poem, story, stuck, subjectivity9 Comments

Begging, this story,
brimming over
bursting out

I suck in,
hesitate
ending preset

message elusive
crushed beneath
weight of subjectivity.

9 thoughts on “Novel on Hold”

pvcann says:

May 26, 2019 at 11:47 pm

That wondering and wrangling inside.

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  May 27, 2019 at 9:49 am
  
  It is….if only I could let go, I might publish something, lol.
  
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  1. pvcann says:
    
    May 27, 2019 at 11:30 am
    
    You will, I’m sure
    
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bettymccreary7347 says:

May 27, 2019 at 9:29 am

“crushed beneath the weight of subjectivity” Love these words!

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  May 27, 2019 at 9:51 am
  
  Thanks Betty – if only I could get out from underneath and finish the darn thing, lol. Hope you are well. I imagine it’s getting hotter where you are.
  
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LuAnne Holder says:

May 27, 2019 at 1:48 pm

So you are really working on a novel? How courageous! Micropoems and flash fiction is about all my short attention span can handle. You go, girl.

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1. V.J. Knutson says:
  
  May 27, 2019 at 4:09 pm
  
  I’ve only been writing and rewriting it for ten years now, lol.
  
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  1. LuAnne Holder says:
    
    May 27, 2019 at 4:35 pm
    
    I did NaNoWriMo last year. Nearly killed me. I got 50,000 words of a very sloppy first draft that did not even finish the story. Novel writing isn’t my forte.
    
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  2. V.J. Knutson says:
    
    May 27, 2019 at 7:57 pm
    
    It does require focus and commitment. I go in spurts.
    
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