Metal moans
and brake lines squeal
as rubber comes to a crawl –
tie-up on the highway.
Roadside wildflowers flourish,
attract birds and bees alike –
a butterfly floats by, nonchalant.
Tempers flare, impatience inches,
horns no deterrence for maddening halt.
Let me be the butterfly, I pray,
carefree in the midst of such fray.
Being stuck in traffic is a great time to look around and notice what we usually fly by. I liked the way you alternated the traffic jam stanzas with the free butterfly stanzas. That had a nice flow to it and the juxtaposition was very effective.
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Thanks, LuAnne – such a contrast deserved recognition.
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Beautiful expressed! Love the last line. 🙂
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Thank you Amy.
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You know…that last line is amazing! It will stay with me. Love it.
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Thanks so much!
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Wow, I can feel you in this one–lovely ending ❤
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Thanks.
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Welcome ❤
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You painted a great picture of the frustration of highway driving 😑 Hope you’re safe.💕
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Thanks Christine. we are.
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I love this last verse “Let me be the butterfly, I pray,
carefree in the midst of such fray”
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Thank you!
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Oh, yes – butterfly is the perfect contrast to snarled traffic! If only we could will our emotions to float away …
Are you finally rolling north?
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We actually landed late last night – exhausted and happy to be home, although the blog won’t reflect it for a bit.
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Whew! Glad you got there safely!
I look forward to Canadian landscapes in my reader.
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Pretty barren here right now, but blossoms should be coming soon.
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Gorgeous imagery. No the highway part, mind you. But, the scene you’ve painted of serenity alongside the highway. Picture perfect! Let’s do a picnic! 😉 😊
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That would be awesome! Thanks.
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😘
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Amazing imagery.
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Thank you, Susan!
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