Even weeds reach for the sky,
as if heaven holds a secret,
as if liberation lies in the stars
and the day’s passage into night
is a promise – I reach for the sky
with my prayers, with my wishes,
am no more enlightened than a weed.

Even weeds reach for the sky,
as if heaven holds a secret,
as if liberation lies in the stars
and the day’s passage into night
is a promise – I reach for the sky
with my prayers, with my wishes,
am no more enlightened than a weed.
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Or you could also say that you are as enlightened as the weed who knows where to thrive in the universe. Lovely poem. The repetition and parallelism work well in this poem.
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Thanks LuAnne. My husband had a chuckle over this poem.
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Wonderful and so we are all weeds, here on earth spreading our seeds, searching for meaning…I loved hearing you read this!
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Thanks so much!
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You are most welcome.
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the first two lines invites me to a very safe place, like your reading V.J
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Thanks Gina
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Audio had nothing – just FYI
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I’ll try again but it said zero in the count
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hmmm….other heard it…not sure what’s going on.
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? Might have been me…
Either way – I enjoyed the post – and wishing you a nice week 😊⭐️
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Really love this so much
It has hope – balance – resilience and humility layered in – is I am going to hear the audio – it this is a top writing piece for me from you
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Thank you so much.
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Interesting to hear your voice, V.J. Yes, we are but weeds reaching for the sky. Tenacious and searching for the light. Love the metaphor. 🙂
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Thanks Olga – just trying something new. We have to keep stretching, don’t we?
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Lovely!
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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Fascinating that we were both in the sky this morning, a fabulous presentation V.J.
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thanks Ivor – something new for me.
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Ah! How surreal.
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Thank you!
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Pleasure.
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