The Boondocks,
my sisters told me,
was not a desirable
place to be –
‘cool’ being the theme
of our generation –
the line between
what was ‘in’
and what was not,
seemed fragile
to my imagination,
mind climbing
to copious possibilities
constantly slammed
by uptight, in-the-know
older siblings
Is it any wonder
that I never belonged,
the line of inclusion
always just out of reach?
Grew fond of
tucked away
spaces –
isolation
Adapted to
the “boonies” –
more refuge
than exile.
(Poem is brought to you by the inspirational prompting of Ragtag Community (copious), Daily Addictions (theme), Fandango’s (fragile), and Manic Mondays 3 Way prompt (Boondocks).
such an incredible piece vj! I absolytely loved it. xoxo
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Thank you. could you relate? Are you a younger sister?
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No Iβm the older sister but I could relate to it π
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Interesting reflection. I thought for awhile that I must have been adopted. Two brothers. Middle child. Always yearned for a sister. Exulansis developed and bloomed in teen years. Artistic pursuits were my friends.
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Maybe it’s just our nature. I was a half sister – which I didn’t know till much later – and understandably, my older sisters did not like my presence, nor what it stood for.
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The intricacies of family drama.
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Oh, yes.
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Thatβs nicely worded π
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Thank you.
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Is it any wonder
that I never belonged,
the line of inclusion
always just out of reach? What a perfect line. I love this poem
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Thank you.
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I loved the last stanza…I have always preferred the boonies!
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Maybe that is where artists are born?
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Ha…all that lonely soul searching!
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Yep.
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Love this! Wonderful!π
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Thanks, Laura
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I love being out in the boondocks! Maybe I owe my older sister a thank-you?
Utter truth in your lines:
“constantly slammed / by uptight, in-the-know / older siblings
… I never belonged, / the line of inclusion / always just out of reach?”
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Sadly, being the fifth, I grew up realizing I had no opinions of my own about music or clothes, and so on. It was all force fed by the ‘elders’.
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