This current disconnect leaves me toe-tapping restless;
see, disease has commandeered my operating system,
and it’d be safe to say, if my body was an elevator
then it never really reaches any floor, and the state
of my alignment leaves me stumbling and ungrounded.
So staying put and writing is about the best I can do –
dVerse that makes me awfully appreciative of you!
(dVerse is celebrating 7 years with a call for a septet – a poem of 7 lines, or stanzas of 7 lines. Check them out!)
It is a wonderful place here. The people kind, supportive, and encouraging. The prompts are always so thoughtful and stretching.
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Yes. Really glad I found it. Thanks for you words.
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Lots to love here, isnโt there.
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There sure is!
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and I reckon it is one of the best thing we can do. Especially if we do good like you. dVerse is amazing.
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Thank you! I am really enjoying it.
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I agree here — the body as an elevator – an excellent image and comparison. I find myself, so often, as an armchair traveler with dVerse. For me, it’s a classroom, a travelogue, and exploration of feelings, a palette of words, and a place of friendship.
So nice to have you here with us! ๐
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So nice to be here. Thanks Lillian. I appreciate your work.
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I am glad that writing has been a great and creative outlet for you ~ Thank you too for supporting our community ~
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A great tribute as having to write a prompt promptly can really ground us and get us writing again!
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It sure does. Thanks for reading!
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Oh yes, these prompts stimulate the creative worms inside our minds and provide a medium for expression, especially when we are dealing with our own vulnerabilities. ๐
-HA
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They sure do. Thanks for commenting
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Excellent comparison between body and elevator ! ๐
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Ha ha – thank you.
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Thoughtful anniversary poem.
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Thanks Kathy
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We appreciate you too, V.J.! I agree with Frank about the phrase ‘if my body was an elevator / then it never really reaches any floor’ – an effective way to describe your situation,
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Thanks Kim.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks!
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If it weren’t for dVerse I probably wouldn’t have written much poetry at all.
Powerful description: ” if my body was an elevator
then it never really reaches any floor, and the state
of my alignment leaves me stumbling and ungrounded.”
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Yes. The prompts are excellent and the community even better. Thanks, Frank.
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