Words, like crickets
leap from my mind
chirping pests whose
trajectory eludes
dulled reflexes,
scuttling about
periphery of logic
Harmless, really,
in the singular –
cacophony of multitudes
threatening to multiply
take with them
semblance of sanity
Intuit a rhythm
I counsel self
to define the notes
in workable phrases
capture essence
and reason message
but the invaders
adverse to linearity
disappear beneath
the floorboards
of my conscious mind.
(Found this poem, languishing in my blog archives.
Edited, and with an updated title, thought it might
be worth a second look. Art my own.)
Love this poem, VJ, especially the second stanza. And the art too – it’s like something breaking and reforming.
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Thanks 🙏
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Well
Done on the revamping of this poetic piece
It might be about crickets but it sure has so many other little tasty visuals and ideas 💡
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Thanks!
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that is excellent vj!
I loved it! ❤
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Thanks 😊
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Words can bring comfort or become pesky. Seems the pesky ones like to linger. A very relatable piece, VJ.
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So true! Thanks, Eugi!
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My pleasure, VJ!
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Interesting! …we have had a crazy influx of crickets this summer. They are harmless and sadly we’ve killed dozens in our house. I actually get used to their noise and they don’t bother me. But I can certainly relate to your words above! (I enjoy listening to them through my open window on a lovely warm evening)
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In some cultures, crickets are lucky, so maybe a good omen? Thanks Lisa.
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Yes I’ve heard that. I actually hate to kill them since they don’t hurt me 😁
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Never thought of words as such! But you are right…they can pester at times. 😅
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They sure do. Thanks.
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Fun – all the same
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Thanks 😊
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This poem definitely was due a second look! Those damn crickets!
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Thanks Heather! Still chirping.
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Not even the snow silences them!
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Lol
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Oooo, yes. Words can knick away at sanity sometimes. But frequently the irritation later turns into a constructive link in expressing difficult thoughts/emotions/needs. Hurrah for journals capturing some of these before they irretrievably “disappear beneath the floorboards of conscious mind”. (Wondering now where “floorboards” is going to present itself as just-the-word-needed for me!)
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Ha ha, knowing you Jazz, you’ll find a place. Thanks.
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I can see intrusive thoughts as a kind of pestilence.
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Especially when I’m trying to sleep, lol.
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Yep, that’s the worst time for those pesky critters to show up.
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