Loneliness –
abandoned and rejected,
grieves unrestrained,
then hesitantly,
willingly,
opens to possibility,
discovering hope,
connection,
in solitude –
not alone
in solitude
connection
discovers hope,
opens to possibility,
hesitantly,
then willingly,
grief releases,
abandons and rejects
loneliness.
(Frank Hubeny is the host tonight for the dVerse Pub, and he challenges to write a reverse poem. Â I found this one in my archives (2015) and with a little tweaking, I think it work.)
Interesting prompt. This does work well!
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Thanks LuAnne. I’d like to try another at some point.
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I might try it, too!
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Very nice reverse direction of solitude to one of hope and connection. Wishing you a good weekend.
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Thanks, Grace. You too.
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The topic you chose flows nicely with this format. Interesting structure. Like an ebb and flow. ❤
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Thanks, Olga. Good way to describe it.
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The searching and finding in this poem is lovely.
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Thank you so much.
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I love this idea of exploring connection in solitude, and through that journey redefining loneliness. This is deeply moving. I, too, am amazed at your ability to swiftly retrieve from your archives. Mine are in boxes and files and I hope you are soon going to offer a poet’s guide to archival success! Thanks for sharing such beautiful writing!
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Oh, I have boxes and boxes dating before 2012. After that, I have this blog, although the non-published works are filed away on my computer or hard drives. Thanks for your thoughts. Nice to hear from you. Happy Friday.
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Impressive and intriguing – both the poem and going back 3 years in response to a prompt! (I have everything I’ve ever written, but lack the mental recall to go looking for a specific.)
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It’s easy really. I just went into my archives. This blog has been going since 2012. Thanks, Jazz. I enjoyed this challenge, will try a new product soon.
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In the first part one discovers, and in the second part one explains, and the poem is lovely!
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Bless you for taking time to read and comment.
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Reblogged this on From guestwriters.
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Thank you Marcus for giving my work more exposure.
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Very nicely done, V.J.
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Thanks!
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I like this one. The growth of hope overcoming loneliness is so beautifully expressed.
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Thanks Suzanne.
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It is a mood reversal, negative to positive. It works brilliantly!
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Thanks.
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🙂
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I admire the positive reversal of mood in this fine piece of writing!
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Well thank you, Lynn.
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You took loneliness to its depths and found “not alone” and reversed back. Very nice.
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Thanks Frank. I’ll have to play with this some more. Some great works have evolved from this challenge.
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Nice work. it works very well. I like the way solitude is rejected in both versions. Hope wins.
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Thanks. I was uncertain as to whether or not this really works. I like your take on it.
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I love loneliness and rejection being abandoned by hope and possibility!
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Thanks Mary. This is a fun challenge and surprising what emerges.
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