Was willing to settle
even before casting off –
anchor-less, with no compass
to guide me, nor oar to steer
Left fate to the currents –
a vessel adrift, naïve –
trusted those with power
to rescue me, unaware…
of the target vulnerability
made of me, that sharks
circle wayward boats,
certain of a catch
No wonder, when finally
I came ashore, wrecked,
I had lost faith in love,
turned hope to cynicism
Had failed to register
the dangers of sailing
into uncharted waters,
without a life preserver
Ignorant of the skills
I needed to stay afloat
and safe, in a sea where
discernment saves lives.
(Washed Ashore first appeared here in July of 2018. Edited. Image my own)
Love the painting, and listening to you read!
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Thanks so much
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Great poem! Love hearing you read it!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful poem, VJ, and words that are so relatable.
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Thanks Lauren!
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OMG this speaks to me ……..How many times have I left fate to the currents…..!
Thank you once again VJ for your wise words of experience. I love the image.
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Right?! Thanks Janet
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I enjoyed this and the image of being adrift and at the mercy of sharks. That shoreline doesn’t look particularly hospitable, either.
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Thanks Eilene.
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Your reading resonated very strongly with me. The shift from naivete and trust to cynicism is very painful.
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It is painful, Liz. Thank you.
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You’re welcome, VJ.
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Love the two opening lines…speaks to so many.
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Thanks Heather
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You’re welcome.
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Liked the words and the picture.
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Thank you
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Yes, the importance of discernment… A big lesson in our human experience. Your poem speaks to this so perfectly, VJ.
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Thanks Susan. Took me a long time to learn that bit.
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Me too.
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This is a great poem.
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Thank you!
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The driftwood lived on VJ
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Lol. Is that what we become?
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I suppose so … old and weathered 😉
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😁
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