Wish I could converse –
one harmonic voice blended
in a symphony of birdsong –
but my tongue stumbles
reveals me as interloper
As much as I tread softly
over forest floor, my missteps
crackle, alert the denizens
danger is about – no imploring
can reverse the impression
Nature’s sensitivity is finely tuned
and I am urban-scented, barely
tolerated, seldom trusted –
must bear my reverence for this
sacred space more deliberately.
(Image my own)
Thanks for sharing
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Beautifully expressed, VJ.
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Thanks 😊
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Mankind needs nature but does nature need mankind?
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I think it needs to be mutual respect. We need to be aware of our impact.
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I agree!
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A fine reflection on an awakening
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Glad if had that effect, Derrick
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Beautiful
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Thanks
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I like this very much, VJ. Your poem expresses the idea of our relationship with nature in a way I’ve not seen before.
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Thanks Liz. I do wonder how we are perceived by the creatures.
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You’re welcome, VJ. Probably something along the lines of, Hey, get outa my house. You weren’t invited.
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Yep. That’s what I suspect
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🙂
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We need a lot of practice to be able to be in the nature without disturbing it.
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We do! Thanks Sadje
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I liked that term, “urban-scented”. I think I am suburban-scented.
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Lol. Yes, perhaps that’s more appropriate.
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Beautifully expressed and so true, VJ.
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Thanks Punam!
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awesome VJ! I loved this! ❤
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Thank you!
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You have poetically placed nature on her rightful throne of our kingdom VJ … Your finale stanza is exquisitely superb …
“Nature’s sensitivity is finely tuned
and I am urban-scented, barely
tolerated, seldom trusted –
must bear my reverence for this
sacred space more deliberately.”
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I completely agree with your comment Ivor! Well done VJ, beautiful poem!
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Thank you Nadine
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Thanks so much
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Thanks Ivor.
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I need nature to calm down sometimes 🌳🌳
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Me too, and I’m overdue!
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