No amount of empathy
could help me understand
the storm inside my father
Even in his death, thoughts
cloud my writing, his presence
preserved in prose…
(Even though it’s been fifteen years, my father’s essence remains strong – sometimes taunting, sometimes inspiring, always mysterious.)
Very touching , poignant piece…
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Thank you!
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The older we get, the larger our parents’ presence seemed to be.
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Isn’t that the truth!
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Yes!
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‘The storm inside my father.’ I think its this particular characteristic of fathers- of not talking about themselves that makes them mysterious and leaves you wanting more, even years later. I feel like that about my dad too who I lost last month.
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Sorry about your loss. I think you are right – dad’s are not conditioned to be open.
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Beautiful tribute. I wonder about so many said and unsaid things by my dad.
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Thanks. The older we get the more we want to know.
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🙏
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I think the older we get (if we’re lucky) the more curious we become about our parents and wonder what made them tick. And of course we curse ourselves for not asking more questions when we could. Lovely, evocative poem, VK. Touches a universal chord, for sure.
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Thanks Susanne.
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Cherish the good memories and let the rest, rest in peace!
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Wish it was that simple. He was a complex man and the work of forgiveness has been long. Now that I can see him with more empathy, I wish we could have a different conversation.
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I know it’s easy said than done… take care, stay strong 🤗
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Thanks.
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Beautiful! ❤️
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Thanks Eva!
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This speaks to me about my own feelings about my dad who has been gone 8 years.
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As I commented to Jazz, time doesn’t alter the curiosity.
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Things I would never have dared ask my dad haunt me … if only I had asked, had known him better … I was still in high school when he abruptly departed.
I too have some things that seem to insist on prose vs poetry.
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It’s been fifteen years for me, but seems that time and distance doesn’t change the desire to know.
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We can never fully understand what’s on others’ minds.
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We truly cannot.
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