Consciousness commands
a shift of focus
tired of the clash of colours
stimulation overload
my muse is leaning towards
the nuance of black and white
A study of shadows
and shading
and how light
arouses the soul
Speak to me in subtleties
she whispers
in tones suggestive
of hidden depths
I am listening
And so I submerge myself
clear the palette of vibrant hues
and take up the lowly pencil
seek the promise
in a colourless world.
(For Reena’s Exploration challenge: a colourless world. Sketch my own.)
That third stanza is killer, VJ! Loved it all. 🙂
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Thanks Susi!
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You’re welcome, VJ!
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Beautiful ❣️ deep ❣️
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Thanks! Appreciate you dropping by.
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I like your poem very much, for the reasons your other commenters have noted. Looking at anything using a different lens is always revealing, particularly a subtle lens.
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Agreed. Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, V.J.
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Beautiful sketch and deep meaning. Sometimes black and white help simplify things.
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Thanks. Appreciate your thoughts.
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You are welcome.
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What lovely scene you’ve created, V.J. ❤ There are so many shades of grey to discover when creating with black and white. In monochrome, the bare bones of an image are revealed, filled with textural delights. I find that converting a photo to monochrome can reveal an interesting world beyond colour, where shadows and light are key elements. 🙂
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Exactly, Olga. There is much to explore without the noise of colour. Thanks.
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Nothing is ever black and white…so well captured in your poem!
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Thanks Heather
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You are welcome!
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Well done! 🙂
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Thanks Deborah!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Everything looks worse in black and white?
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No! When stripped of the distraction of colour, there is more to appreciate. (Your photography might have taught me that btw)
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Colourless Expressions ….. by VJ Knutson
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Profound, as usual! How many colors do black and white conceal in them?
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Exactly!
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This really grabbed hold of me: “my muse is leaning towards / the nuance of black and white”. A fitting title.
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Thanks Benjamin.
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Welcome.
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