Hold my words
up to your lens –
exchange snippets
distracted lives
hold no audience
I seek a way home.
(Reena’s Exploration challenge invites us to write a cryptic poem. Image my own.)
Hold my words
up to your lens –
exchange snippets
distracted lives
hold no audience
I seek a way home.
(Reena’s Exploration challenge invites us to write a cryptic poem. Image my own.)
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This poem resonates. I especially like,
distracted lives
hold no audience
I seek a way home.
Beautiful
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Thanks Ali.
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Yes, this is cryptic. Your poem reminds of medieval riddles in which the verse is cast in the voice of the solution.
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Hmm…interesting. Thanks.
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So beautiful
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Thanks so much!
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cryptic indeed!
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Oh good! Thanks.
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Welcome!
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You can’t go home again-EVER!
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Sadly true…sigh
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Disconnect …. by VJ Knutson
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distracted lives
hold no audience
It is depiction of a painful reality.
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Thanks Reena.
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