Somehow I knew his mask was porcelain –
impossible to hide the soul’s light
reflected in troubled eyes…
I played along though,
humoured his self-deception
nodded at assertions of calm
Knew that one day the facade would crack
the mask would slip and the rage escape
Why I didn’t run; I do not know
Maybe it was recognition –
my own countenance a carefully construed lie
Maybe I needed to prove to myself
that no matter how violent his storm
this time I would emerge triumphant.
(Poem inspired by Sadje’s What Do You See image prompt.)
We think emerging triumphant is the goal. It’s not.
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Exactly my point. Thanks
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so much power and knowing in your touching poem, VJ💕
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Thank you, Cindy
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🩷💕🩷
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Wonderful work – filled with emotion!
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Thank you
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This is a beautifully crafted poem VJ. It’s such a touching poem with so much honesty in it. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you Sadje. Happy to participate
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You’re very welcome. ☺️
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Very true. I’m only just learning how my own faults are reflected in his. Easy to be blind to that.
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Yes, it takes a fair bit of willingness to dig.
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Insights that can only come from a deep, dark night of the soul.
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Indeed!
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Wow!
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Thanks
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Very powerful
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Thanks Derrick
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VJ, I love this for the heartbreaking stubbornness and admission of one’s own shortcomings.
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Thanks Punam. Sometimes we get trapped into situations because of our own toxicity.
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You are welcome. I agree but it takes courage to admit that.
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Out of the blue ocean, into the black sea
We still appear wet behind our ears
And still burning bridges made out of ancient trees
Repeating the same old questions, while wearing our masks of tears
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Bravo!
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Thanks VJ
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You are most welcome!
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“still burning bridges made out of ancient trees”
Wow, Ivor!
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Thank you kindly 😊🌏
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