Young woman, I see your pain
remember a time when I too
struggled for autonomy, purpose
Wish I could reach across
the span of generations, mirror
the beauty that I see, release
the tangle of deception that binds,
facilitate your potential, help
advance your journey, lift you
beyond the clutter and noise
and deliver you to freedom, but
your book has not been written
and the chapters need to unfold
as they will, and I am no deity
who sees with clarity the path
you must choose, the destiny
that calls you – trust that life
is educational, and you bear
the resources to see your way
through; celebrate your hunger
and rejoice in your triumphs
I will watch with nostalgia
and the pride of recognition,
for your giftedness is real
your optimism a worthy tool,
and I know you will succeed –
have faith in your tomorrows
for you were born to shine
and the pages of your memoir
await experience’s depths.
(Young Woman, I See first appeared here in September, 2017. Image my own)
As much as i wish I could reach into my daughters heart with these messages.. such loving warmth in your words. 💞
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I love this poem. There is so much comfort and wisdom in your words ❤
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I’m glad it came across that way. If only someone had spoken to us that way….thanks.
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Beautiful words, thank you for sharing VJ. E.
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Thanks Elizabeth
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Hey Vj
I loved this poem so much and it was great in each section
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Also – I might email you about using this in an anthology I am putting together on youth and maturing into adulthood – this would be perfect and so just be thinking
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What a complement, Yvette. Thank you!
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Wow, this one went straight to the heart! I could have used it when my daughter was going through her early adulthood struggles.
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I wrote it while watching my daughters struggle. Not necessarily something they want to hear from a mother. Thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, VJ. I wouldn’t listen to my mother at that age either. And of course came to regret it.
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Lol
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Yes!! Such a moving and inspirational write. If I had a daughter, I would be sharing this with her.
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Thanks Heather.
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A pleasure!
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Perfect words, VJ! I love this! ❤️
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Thanks Nadine.
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Enjoyed your reading this! I wonder, had anyone offered such wisdom when I was not-quite-adult … would I have listened? comprehended? Hindsight confirms your wisdom here – the path brings struggles that shape and fulfil one’s potential (often disguised as obstacles!)
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No chance I would have listened, lol. Thanks Jazz.
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Women of various generations have, different kinds of struggles, and, we are, constantly, fighting hard, for all the rights that should be ours to begin with, because, that’s the, path of women, since the world, began…
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Amen to that!
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VJ I have sent your site to my granddaughters, I know they will enjoy the read. Have a great weekend. E.
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Thanks Elizabeth!
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A beautiful poem VJ
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Thanks Sadje!
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My pleasure
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Truly beautiful poem 💕✨
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Thanks Amber
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You’re welcome VJ💞
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