Summer yearns
sun burning
water cooling
life affirming
longing for love
I would hold you there
in those days of youth
when relationship
donned mystery
and fear shrouded
the path
But Autumn reigns now
a time for letting go
a time for turning
back clocks – time
lost in a mere blink
on the shores
of our story
And soon Winter
when I will knit
our memories
into cozy dreams
and while away
the frosty mornings
sipping from the cup
of moments lost.
(Eugi’s Weekly Prompt is : Autumn. Image my own)
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Beautiful. Loved this poem.
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Thanks Indira!
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A very beautiful write, dear VG. Seasons I have similarly passed… ❤
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Thanks 🙏
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This is really lovely. Especially that last line.
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Thanks Kate
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Thanks for sharing
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Beautiful✨
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Thanks 😊
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Beautifully expressed it, and very moving… LOVE it!
Thank you for this beautiful post, VJ!
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Thanks Amy!
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beautiful V.J, especially the last few winter lines
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Thanks Gina!
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My pleasure V.J
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Love this poem..thanks
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Thank you!
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V.J. Such a heartwarming and poem. Loved it. We have so many mutual followers and I finally had time to look at your site and it’s lovely. I’m following you now. Visit when you can and we can stay in touch. ❣️🙏
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Thanks Cindy. Your blog is gorgeous, and it makes my day to find a new kindred spirit to interact with here.
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You’re so welcome V.J. Oh that’s so kind of you, thank you! I’m thrilled and look forward to getting to know you and your work more as well!! 💕🙏
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VJ, you have a writing voice and style that is honest and insightful and absolutely one-of-a-kind. ✨
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Thanks Michele. That’s a wonderful compliment to kick start my day.
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A most deserving compliment. Best to you. 💐
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Beautiful! Funny, Winter sounds so cozy here. Of the life seasons depicted, that is my favorite.
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Thanks so much, Deborah
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Wow, this is a wonderful poem, VJ. The analogy of our lives with the changing of the seasons really spoke to me. Each stanza was a lovely poem of its own but I loved how they flowed together so well.
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Just like the seasons. Thanks LuAnne
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Oh, my! I clung to every word as you took us on a seasonal journey from summer to the year’s end. Your last two lines are awesome! Thank you for joining in and Brava!
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Thanks Eugi!
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My pleasure!
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awesome, loved it 🙂
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Thank you!
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I loved this poem. Especially the winter – knitting memories into cozy dreams… beautiful.
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Thanks Heather.
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You’re welcome! Happy Thanksgiving!
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You too!
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Beautiful post V.J. 🙂
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Thanks Margaret!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Wish I could turn back the clock on bodily aging without losing all the wisdom gained through spiritual aging. Both occur in parallel … interesting tradeoff of dominant energies.
Love your closing stanza – a model perspective!
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Isn’t that true about the parallels! Thanks Jazz.
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I LOVE this poem!! I’ve bookmarked it to return to.
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Thanks Liz. You’ve made my day.
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You’re welcome, VJ. It’s a wonderful poem.
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What a lovely poem VJ.
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Thanks Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful. So atmospheric
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Thanks 🙏
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You’re welcome
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