Brown eyes, unblinking
bat golden lashes skyward –
celestial flirt
(Image my own. This haiku first appeared on One Woman’s Quest II in August 2020.)
Brown eyes, unblinking
bat golden lashes skyward –
celestial flirt
(Image my own. This haiku first appeared on One Woman’s Quest II in August 2020.)
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i love this! I find haiku challenging to write well, but I read from collections and always feel a little enlightened when I do. I really enjoyed yours, VJ.
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Thanks Debra. It’s a good practice to fine tune our word count.
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Delightful!
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Thanks 😊
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Like this word “Celestial flirting”! 😊
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Thanks 😊
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This is such a delicate and playful haiku! The last line… the most beautiful.
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Thanks so much!
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Could be the Susan’s or it could apply to cows too! lol …not sure where that thought came from. Nice Haiku!
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Lol. Thanks for chuckle
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Welcome!
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Haikulicious!
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Thanks Ron!
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I love this bit of whimsy to start my day!
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Oh good. Happy long weekend!
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Thanks, VJ. So far, so good!
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Very appealing to my …
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Thanks 🙏
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so nice, VJ! ❤
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Thanks 😊
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