Natural light preferable
to artificial – not the harsh
fullness of noonday sun
but softly filtered rays –
luxurious…
inviting
Love too, should be subdued,
gentle as a zephyr –
not mythical, but yielding…
mindful
not worshipful nor boastful
but comforting…
warm
I am waning light
the mistral wind wafting
no longer a force of nature
but smoke, spiralling
vanishing into non-existence
And yet,
even as shadows spread
I yearn – heart
beating true
not lost,
not forgotten,
but withdrawn…
humbled
passion mellowed
by years of constructing walls –
grit and tar –
scar’s long buried
save the limping gait
of a ghost.
(Even Ghosts Yearn first appeared here in July, 2018. Image my own.)
When this image flashed across my screen, I was captivated by its soft beauty. Also love the poem.
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Thanks Tanja!
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Oh wow, VJ! I believe this is the first time I heard you speak. Your have such a lovely voice and cadence. Beautifully written as well. This excerpt currently speaks to me…
“I am waning light
the mistral wind wafting
no longer a force of nature
but smoke, spiralling
vanishing into non-existence”
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Thanks for listening. So appreciate your feedback.
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Lovely hearing it in your voice. Liked the title.
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Thank you Indira.
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My pleasure, dear.
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What an amazing poem. I am touched by the part where you write about love as a gentle experience. yes that’s how love should be. A pleasure to read
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Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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Love listening to you read! It has a great peacefulness to it and that title hit me hard right away! Great work!
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Thanks Benjamin. This is one of my favourites.
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Welcome! It’s exceptional. Lots of praise to it and you!
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This is such a nice poem 🧡✨
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Thank you. Looks like you’re just getting started. Good luck to you.
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Thanks a lot 🙂🧡✨
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How lovely VJ! I loved hearing your voice.
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Thanks. A little rusty that voice, lol.
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Simply beautiful!
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Thanks Heather
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You’re welcome.
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I really enjoyed hearing you read your poem! Very beautiful!
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Thanks Lisa.
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Beautifully presented!
The combination of the image, your reading, and the poem presented – it really touches me on so many levels. I showed your post to Younger Daughter (an aspiring poet) as a lovely idea for presenting her work.
My favourite lines which really captures where I am right now:
“I am waning light
the mistral wind wafting
no longer a force of nature
but smoke, spiralling
vanishing into non-existence”
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Thanks so much Ju-Lyn. Such a wonderful compliment.
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You are an amazing artist and writer..love this poem and your painting.
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Thank you. I wish it was a painting, but just a photograph.
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This is another poem of yours that just had to be spoken word. I love the poem and how you read it.
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Thanks Liz.
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Beautiful, VJ! You have a wonderful speaking voice and you tell a tale well. 🙂
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Thanks Susi. Appreciate your words
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You’re welcome, VJ! 🙂
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It’s a brilliant poem, but VJ, your spoken word!!! Amazing, I really loved it, it adds so much to the words already written 👏👏👏👏
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Thanks so much!
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There is a gentle flow…a stillness to your words…so beautiful. Loved your recording.
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Thanks so much!
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My pleasure.
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This is lovely.
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Thank you.
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This says it all – passion mellowed
by years of constructing walls, grit and tar
scar’s long buried, save the limping gait
of a ghost. Muses of emotions conveyed in this poem. 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Absolutely beautiful – and beautifully read! I’m drawn especially to the spiraling smoke … rising higher and thinning/blending with surrounding All … this resonates as a glorious escape!
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Thanks Jazz. This is an older poem, but it keeps calling to me. My dear hubby is back in hospital – fifth surgery on his poor knee. Life, eh?
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Yikes – 5 surgeries on the same knee? I tense at the thought. Fingers crossed for both of you that Ric’s recovery this round can be complete. (If only bodies could be predictable!)
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Thanks Jazz. Hard not to be worried. This is the knee the became infected – he’s still on mutli anti-biotics. They are talking about sending him to our local hospital for rehab which will help both our spirits.
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Yet another fine metaphor
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Thanks Derrick!
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Wow! I absolutely love this one, VJ: the theme and tone and how wonderfully it’s crafted (and read)! 🤗❤️
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Thanks Laura!
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Thank YOU! 😊
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🌼😍beautiful, — «as shadows spread, I yearn – heart»
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Thank you. Btw, thought I was following you, but see that it didn’t take. Tried again, and it still didn’t work. Not sure if it’s me or you? Have you had trouble with followers.
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😍thanks for your promptness, VJ.
honestly… it happened sometimes but only because I prefer to be notified for each post of the person I follow, especially to not lose any post shared; also, because I opted to be notified when comments arrive… [it’s enough for not getting my mail loaded too much]; [so I guess depends on options… in case [if] the WordPress platform is 100% functionally] 😉
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I entered my email by it rejected me.
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would be so fine if i could have every time an answer… 🌼
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This one is absolutely brilliant and very beautiful as is the image:)
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Thanks Janet!
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oh how i love to hear you read your poem VJ
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Thanks Mich!
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