Nightfall, river calls
tranquility leaves footprints
on my soul, this life
seldom calm, craves redemption –
river throws calm and I fetch.
(Image my own)
Nightfall, river calls
tranquility leaves footprints
on my soul, this life
seldom calm, craves redemption –
river throws calm and I fetch.
(Image my own)
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This poem has such a simple beauty..
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Wonderful and refreshing tanka!
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You’re welcome!
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Beautiful bonding between river and you.
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Thank you
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🙂
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Very nice!
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In love with that image: “footprints on my soul”!
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Welcome!!! 🙂
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I too want to fetch the calmness of river.
Love the tanka with the beautiful image.
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Oh, yes!
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Very peaceful words. 😌
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We all need to fetch a bit of calm … thanks, VJ!
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Especially old dogs like me, lol. Thanks.
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Beautiful:)
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Thank you
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Nicely penned! 🙂 ❤
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😊
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Beautiful photo, hard not to fetch the calm from a moment like that.
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Glad I was able to capture it.
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The wonderful thing about photos is they allow us to return to the moment as often as we please.
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So beautiful, love all the tranquility in it!
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Thanks Elizabeth.
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I love the metaphor of the last line!
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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