One (me) plus one (you)
equals two (a couple)
So why is it that division
makes me feel less than whole
And subtraction (we minus you)
renders me an integer
And how, in this state of sub zero
do I solve for y?
(For Reena’s Exploration challenge: prompt here. Image my own.)
Thank you!
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Clever! 🙂 🙂
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Thank you!
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Nice ending line. As they y could stand in for why? And then I love the use of parentheses in this! Always very fun reading your work!
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome!
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Really love this. Amazing write.
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Thanks so much!
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Love it. The last two lines are wow.
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Thanks so much!
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
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Nice, so beautiful
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Thanks
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oooo……..this is very good VJ! and your painting is absolutely lovely.
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Thanks Wendi!
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my pleasure…..
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ohhh yey this is so lovely VJ
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Thanks Mich.
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Your poem is right on target. There is no formula for matters of the heart.
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Can’t tell you how often I’ve looked for one, lol. Thanks Liz.
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Yep, me, too!
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The title has drawn my attention to this post! It is such a sweet one. Thanks for bringing a smile to my face during such a tough time 🙂
#MyWordsKraft
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Appreciate you leaving a note.
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What an ingenious take! Love it.
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Thanks.
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You are welcome.
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Absolutely loved this V.J. Really creative and your image is also wonderful
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Thanks Tina.
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❤️
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Thanks.
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Welcome.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Heart Math ….. by VJ Knutson
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A puzzle I can’t solve 😃
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Exactly. There is no formula it seems.
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Nice heart maths
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Thanks.
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Most welcome!
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