What if we could proofread
our life – edit it in the moment –
patch over the rough spots –
change the dragon lady
into a polished princess?
Don’t know about you,
but I prefer fire to ice…
(Image mine.)
What if we could proofread
our life – edit it in the moment –
patch over the rough spots –
change the dragon lady
into a polished princess?
Don’t know about you,
but I prefer fire to ice…
(Image mine.)
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Proofreading and editing my life would be quite the task! But, yeah, I prefer fire to ice and let my inner dragon roar. Truly, a brilliant piece, VJ.
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Thanks Eugi!
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You’re welcome!
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Bought a smile to my face and a lift to my heart. Its hard being a fire lighter in a world of ice queens.
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Well said. Thanks.
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If you edit it in the moment you’re not in the moment. The last thing I want on my tombstone is Coulda, Shoulda, Woulda.
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Somehow I think there is no fear of that, Mike.
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Do you think its because my family would struggle with the right font? I’m thinking Century Schoolbook but then they have to decide on size, leading, etc. Fuggetaboutit, I prefer fire. 🚬
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Lol. Now that you put it that way…me too.
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Too much patchwork blocks the authentic – and if it’s fiery – so be it! Thanks for another thought provoker 🙂
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Thank you, Andrea!
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You’re welcome V.J.
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Yes. I want to do that. 🙂
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Love this. Let the dragon breathe, I say!
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Thanks Heather!
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Welcome!
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I love this! Though I did hear that “ice […] is also great / and would suffice”. Strong opening, middle, and end. What more could a piece of writing need.
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I admit I was inspired by the original. Thanks Benjamine.
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Welcome. This is equally as good 🙂 Really.
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You are too kind.
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Just a bit of truth. Have a great weekend!
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You too!
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Ha…. I’d never have enough patches to cover all the rough spots…. and I shall remain a fire-walker..
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I’m with you on both.
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