All is movement
all is change
Why then am I stuck
a rock holding its ground?
Each moment flows
into the next
then is gone
Calm unsettles me
I stand upon the bank
and search for rapids
Let go of worry
trust process
Life is a river
Take me to that river
bathe me in faith
for now, I fear the flow.
wow………you are on a roll VJ – bathe me in faith – Amen to that……….those words truly hit my soul.
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Thank you so much! i appreciate you taking the time to read so many.
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you are very welcome, it was truly my pleasure.
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If you bathe me in faith , then I do not even see the flow.
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Enjoying your comments today – thanks!
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I fear the flow also. Every time I go the the grocery store, there is more change. Yesterday, there was a line-up outside and as one person came out, another was let in. Regulated social distancing. Still no Kleenex or TP. 😦 We now have our third case in Sudbury. 😦
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Our grocery stores are now delivering. Stay safe.
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V.J.
lovely and timeless
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Thanks AM
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I like how you push the idea of battle throughout the poem. It starts with the title (fear vs. faith) and then moves to the (time vs. stagnation) and then (worry vs. trust) and then back to (fear vs. faith). The way you structure a poem, the words you use: this really is on a master-like level or beyond, even. I don’t say this lightly. Great work as always!
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Thank you so much. Perhaps proof that writing everyday does grow the craft. Appreciate your feedback.
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You’re welcome. Yes, agreed. Hard work can help a lot in all things.
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Wow! What a beautiful image of the inner dialogue many of us feel during times of change,
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Thanks so much. Likely many of us are feeling it right now.
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An incredibly lovely piece! ❤
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Thanks Deborah.
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My pleasure! ❤
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Take me to the river, dip me in the water, washing me down, washing me down…
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Thanks, now I’ve got that song stuck in my head, lol.
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It beats the news by a mile!
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Yes to that!
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I love the organization of this piece. I think the dialogue with oneself is very effective in conveying the fear.
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Thanks Heather. Don’t we all dialogue with ourselves like this, lol
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Lol! Especially these days…
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….profoundly enunciated — the rock we’re all clinging to doesn’t seem able to anchor us as the waters swirl
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Thank you. Wonderful feedback.
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Very effective. Upon rereading it, it occurred to me that the only process I trust is the writing process.
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It is a good process, I agree – even if the conversation is with oneself, lol.
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😀
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Its healing this writing process.
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It is.
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Yes, it definitely is.
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