Adept at uprooting,
conditioned to follow chaos –
know my place there.
Kindness unsettles –
each ray piercing
cracking the crust
unleashing a prism
both painful and joyous –
legacy of dysfunction.
(Poem from Twitter @Vjknutson. Image from personal collection.)
I love that first stanza, V.J. I can so relate to that concept but never able to put it to words – Knowing my way around in chaos. Thanks for expressing that so well.
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Glad you could relate, LuAnne. Thanks so much.
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This one is very relatable. Well-done, VJ.
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Thanks Susi
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Thank YOU! 🙂
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Love this piece, V.J.
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Thanks Mitch!
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A very powerful poem. I was moved by it.
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Thanks Liz.
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It’s exhausting to adapt new places and the ever-changing inner and outer bodies of ours. It’s a blessing to be able to accept and adjust. At least it’s my story.
Thank you for sharing this poem, V.J.!
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Thanks for your thoughts Miriam. I certainly find constant change is exhausting as I get older. I long for settled.
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I know the feeling, V.J., we’re not as independent as we get older! I hope you get settled soon!
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Yes.
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Thanks
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This poem’s truth breaks through the posturing facades we learn to wear growing up in malevolent dysfunction. When you said “Kindness unsettles” it is so true. I had to grow into accepting kindness as something I love to be, give, and receive! Your brilliance at work yet again! 🙂 ❤
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Thanks Deborah, for understanding. I used to withdraw from kindness, suspicious of its intentions.
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Yes me too! I am so grateful you write about these things! ❤
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That means more than you can ever know.
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Yes, this is a powerful poem. Powerful message…”know my place there…” It is so exhausting trying to find that new place. I like the photo you chose for this post too.
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Thanks Andrea.
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Welcome.
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Wow, V.J., this is so powerful! You always touch me at soul level with your poetry. Hope you’re doing well sweet friend. I’m just catching up after several weeks’ break, but look forward to seeing what you’ve been up to while I was gone.
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Nice for you to have a break! Hope it was an enjoyable one. Thanks Terri!
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