Cocooned, I am
enclosed, secure
shut down
Ignore initial
stirring –
like a skipped
heartbeat
Convinced
this retreat
is cemented
Have had enough
life too harsh
soul too sensitive
and yet, there it is
again – gathering
momentum uninvited
sensations, emotions
morphing into words
commanding expression
growing wings,
battering my barriers
flocking towards light
poems emerge
and I am stripped naked
exposed once again.
(Inspired by the prompts of Ragtag Community: stir, and Reena’s Exploration Challenge who provided the featured image.)
Us, who love to write.
“poems emerge
and I am stripped naked
exposed once again.”
Hard not to bleed to paper. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
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Thanks so much, Johnny!
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You are welcome my friend.
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This is a compelling expression of release.
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Thank you, Ken.
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A story told in a poem. Dark beginning yet hope prevails at the end! Splendid piece!
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Thank you, Eugenia!
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You’re welcome.
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Yo9u cannot deny the life you are, experience will speak.
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It sure does. Thanks Paul.
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Pleasure VJ
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There is no escaping it. I loved this poem.
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Thanks so much!
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You are welcome
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I love the movement of this poem!
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Thanks Liz.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Broken shell …. by VJ Knutson
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sensations, emotions
morphing into words
commanding expression
This is a process that just overtakes. Thanks, VJ!
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It really is. Well said, Reena.
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growing wings,
battering my barriers
flocking towards light
^ what an incredible line
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Thank you!
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So much to like – and a top takeaway was getting to the part “poems emerge” like how you brought us there
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Thanks Paul. I think all here can appreciate how those poems taunt us
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So beautiful. Imagery that speaks to the soul.
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Thank you so much.
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