My forward movement
startles us both –
you ground foraging
with the robins,
me delighted
by a flash of red –
heart at your nape.
You rise, alight
on tree branch
your squeaky call,
warning or greeting
stops me in my track –
patiently I wait
as you circle the tree
head bobbing, alert,
till we both settle
and my lens succeeds.
(For Granny Shot It’s Bird of the Day. Image from personal collection.)
Nice
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Thank you.
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Thank you! Viewing the world in metaphorical layers makes for a very rich existence indeed.
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Wonderful! It reminded me of a couple’s dance as they settle into comfort with each other.
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What a wonderful thought, Liz!
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Thanks! I think perhaps because so much of your poetry is about relationships, my mind immediately went to metaphor. Either way, the poem is a joy to read.
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Astute observation. I think in analogies. I view the world in metaphorical layers – perhaps why I love poetry so.
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A poem about patience! Love it.
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Nature does teach us that. Thanks Jazz!
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Loved your poetic description of the woodpecker!
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Thanks Heather
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You’re welcome!
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