It’s a bird’s perspective I envy –
the ability to perch up high,
balanced no matter the weather,
unaffected by the drama below –
I shall never know such calm,
being afraid of heights.
(For Reena’s Exploration challenge: perspective.)
It’s a bird’s perspective I envy –
the ability to perch up high,
balanced no matter the weather,
unaffected by the drama below –
I shall never know such calm,
being afraid of heights.
(For Reena’s Exploration challenge: perspective.)
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Wouldn’t it be nice to be able to enjoy this perspective?! Sitting atop a perch and enjoying the calm. Excellent take on the prompt, V.J.
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Thanks Eugenia.
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If thus afraid of heights you are
But still yearn for the view,
The best thing you can do by far,
Is get a drone then, do!
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Lol! Love it!
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V.J. this is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery, and can think of so many ways this speaks to me!
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Thanks Debra
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This is everything a poem should be, a clear image, a strong metaphor and it can be read over and over without losing impact. Really like it!
(I’m now going to do something I never do, because it would irritate me if someone did it to me, so tell me to bugger off and I’ll understand…but would it be even stronger if you changed “being afraid of heights” to “I’m afraid of heights”…more of a declaration.)
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Hmm, will have to muse over that. I keep rewriting it each time. Thanks Jim
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love your perspective, your bird’s eye view of the matter
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Thanks Gina
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I’m with you, VJ–it would be great, except for the height, haha.
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Lol.
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🙂 🙂 Maybe a net below would help us? 🙂
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maybe…
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🙂
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..not to mention being able to wing it at a moment’s notice!
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For sure, lol. Thanks Heather.
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You are welcome!
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Excellent!
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Thanks Mike
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I like this very much! A lot said in a few short lines.
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Thank you Liz!
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You’re welcome!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
A birds’s eye view …………. by VJ Knutson
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It is a lightness of being, without too many perspectives. We carry a lot of baggage.
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Don’t we just. Thanks Reena.
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They do have a calm and freedom we will never know.
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They do! Thank you.
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