Idleness fills his hours
as if time knows no limits
I devour moments, afraid
tomorrow will forget me
we see-saw between
treacherous righteousness
and fusty avoidance
ignoring balance –
a sensible response.
(Inspired by the perils of an aging marriage, and submitted for Ragtag Community’s prompt: fusty.) Image from personal collection.
So captures the human condition, we do see-saw at times, wonderful lines VJ.
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Thanks Paul.
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Very welcome VJ
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Oh, I can visualize this unfortunate scenario. Everything about this piece is well done! I love the word “fusty”! 😉
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Thanks Eugenia.
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Well done! “Fusty” is just an apt word for codgerdom.
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Thanks. It is!
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PS: LOVE the photo!!
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Thank you – he’s the barn, I”m the silo, lol.
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Hahahahahahahahaha–you’re killin’ me!!!
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Oh my, you’ve drawn this scene/slice of life So Well!!! Balance is a fine concept, worthy, sensible, full of health benefits…but I tend to smirk and frown in confusion, as though it’s a complex algebra problem 🙂 I’m workin’ on it, truly I am, Professor…hoping to get it solved before the Final Exam 🙂
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Ha ha ha – seems I’m too stubborn to take the easier road.
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Maybe that’s what it is with me…I feel so much better now…I think 🙂 🙂 You’re too much–I love your quips! ❤
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Haha, V.J. I’m not doing Idle time, yet…… I seem to run out of my limit……
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Lol. Good to hear. By the way, your site is not letting me access posts again.
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Damn WP… I’ll have a look
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There is definitely a melancholy tinge to this poem; it’s sad to think of how two people who might have once been so in love, now have moments of idleness and fusty avoidance.
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Sadly, it’s life. Relationships change.
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How bizarre it can get as the years go by. Well said, V.J.
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Lol. Glad you like it.
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Really drawn to “fusty avoidance” – as phrase and as sum-up of a coping mode I fall into when all other coping skills dissipate !
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Lol – isn’t it true. Thanks Jazz. Hope you are settling happily back into home life.
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Settling will begin next week. This week I am driving across town daily to tend to 2 very elderly cats that my daughter house-sits with in owner’s absence – daughter now on a week’s vacation. I signed up readily given prior acquaintance with both cats, plus their owner is a very good friend – a shaman/dreamworker/poet (who travels over 50% of each year). Being in her space for 4 hours each day is a gift, as is being with tabbies Bella and Jasper – teaching me a few things about elderly disabilities and temperament! Oh, but morning rush-hour traffic getting there is BRUTAL. Bella has detached retinas and can’t see much of anything – morning meds essential.
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Many lessons in this scenario. Can’t think of anyone better to be entrusted with such responsibility.
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Oh that idleness, if only, why is it men seem to have no problem with it! lol
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It definitely a Mars and Venus things.
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