That day, crossing the parking lot,
raven swooped past, snake in clasp –
I took it as a sign, hurried my steps.
The ward nurse stopped me,
revealed the end was near,
appointed me bearer of news.
Me, whom you loved to hate –
lashed with brash comments,
unforgiving of my youth.
Unsurprising, your wrath,
and then the threats –
to be cut from your will
Deeply ingrained the need
to hate, to blame β lawyer
didnβt comply, I remained
Represented you in death,
sorry for a life of lies ,
how often you had to pretend
to love men,
to not be lonely,
that alcohol solved all
Miss you even now –
your caustic presence
irreplaceable, left a hole.
Donβt regret finding you,
getting help, staying
bedside as death knocked.
Youβd do the same –
intrinsically linked,
the raven and the snake.
(Linked to Reena’s Exploration Challenge where the prompt is to write about sudden, magical events.)
Excellent post π
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Appreciate it!
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I read this as both prophetic and Jungian, a deeply layered story of one’s life. Great piece.
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High praise! Thank you!
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Well deserved.
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This poem is very moving! And I love the repeat of the image of the Raven and the Snake!
I must confess that I too will see interesting things like this and think of the sighting as an omen or sign of sorts…
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It makes life more of a mystery, doesn’t it?! Thanks Betty.
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What a powerful analogy you create, V.J. There is just the right amount of tension and mystery.
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Oh, good. Thanks LuAnne!
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Great post π
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Thank you!
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Complicated family relationships are a mixture of love, hate, pain and sadness. It’s amazing how one personality can overpower another. I really liked your dark, intense poem V.J. π
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Thanks, Christine – you understand the complexity well.
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VJ your poem resonates and I like the way you characterize the relationship with a raven and a snake.
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Thanks Jade
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You are welcome.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Raven and Snake …by VJ Knutson
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Parent-offspring bonds often border on extremes. Apparent indifference has a deeper cause in the psyche. I guess expectations are always high.
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Yes. This was a maiden aunt – my father’s sister – who basically lived with us. She never approved of us kids and at the same time was a character.
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All of us have these characters in families.
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Intense.
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Thank you, I think, lol.
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Intense in a thought provoking way!
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Oh good
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