Re-
dun-
dant,
these
rituals
by which
I define myself –
find purpose, validate
my being – I create herculean
tasks, ignore God’s role, the cycles
of nature; script myself responsibility –
a dramatic starring role with no applause,
and in the end, when light has given over to dark
and this body has failed me, will objectivity set me free
or shall I return to do it all again…a hypnotic spiral dance?
(Inspired by Willow Poetry’s Challenge: What Do You See? Featured image is the prompt.)
Oh, yes! Love this masterpiece!
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Bless you, Eugenia!
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🙂
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Round and round we go, until we’re dizzy, and yet we continue. This is excellent, V.J.!!
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Thanks Dorinda!
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You’re welcome!
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you’ve captured that so well, clever structuring and movement, briliant.
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Thank you!
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Most welcome VJ
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Great response to this prompt, V.J.
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Thanks LuAnne
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As someone who creates too many tasks, some way too much for me, I really relate to this wordplay. I also am impressed by your words and the way they echo the shape of the tower.
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Thank you, and sorry you share the same affliction.
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Lovely as always V.J. “I create herculean
tasks, ignore God’s role, the cycles
of nature; script myself responsibility”
Such a burden we put on ourselves.
It describes me too.
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Thanks Hélène. I think we are guilty to some extent.
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Yes, the things we deem important, in the end really aren’t. Love the format!
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Thanks Heather!
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Oh very clever! 🙂 “A hypnotic spiral dance” Love that 💕
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Thanks Christine
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Phenomenal! “script myself responsibility – a dramatic starring role with no applause”!! Soooo true, probably universal – even those who get some applause never feel it’s enough. But your last line says it all … life as hypnotic spiral dance. I like to think my going-in-circles is spiraling upward rather than downward …
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Oh yes – upwards for sure (I hope). Thanks Jazz.
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Oooo / this is VJ’s raw and dense writing – I like the way the sentences flowed and built down – like stairs – and content good –
Personal for you perhaps but parts applicable to all (like a good poetry offers the reader)
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Thank you so much. I agree, I’ve seen it often.
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And you offer it often as a poet (or is it poetess?)
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My husband says I am a’poemist’, lol.
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haha love it (and it is true)
– oh and maybe a poemista
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lol
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“responsibility –
a dramatic starring role with no applause”….exactly LOL
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Yes! Thank you!
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