Cater,
Good Woman; keep your pantry full –
there are mouths to feed, and
whims to answer,
smile on.
Smile on,
Good Woman, feed the children young
and old, their needs cry out
for nourishment;
be strong.
Be strong,
Good Woman, tending your oven,
concocting recipes,
born to serve, raised
to please.
To please
Good Woman, be sure your own pot
is overflowing, lest
fatigue sets in,
and then
And then,
Good Woman, who caters to you –
the children are gone and
husband retired –
what now?
(This is a Crown Cinquain written for Dark Side of the Moon’s challenge.)
Oh, I absolutely love this, V.J. – the form and the content. Now I have to go on over to the Dark Side of the Moon and get the ‘rules’. This form would be such a good prompt for our writer’s group here.
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Oh do! I’m enjoying her prompts – stretches me.
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Yes, what now? Maybe more time to reinvent oneself. 🙂
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With whatever is left over lol.
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At least we have our creative spark.
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We do!
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Powerful emotions !
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Thank you
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What now indeed! 🙂 I love how you stress the importance of keeping our own needs met even while we meets the needs of others; for when we neglect ourselves, we cannot care for others as we should. Great flow. I’d have to say this is fast becoming my favorite form.
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It certainly is an interesting form, and adds so much to the poem. Thanks Abigail.
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WOW WOW WOW, V.J.–spectacular, and very smooth.
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Thank you. Interesting form.
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Most welcome.
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I really like how you have left us with food for thought!
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Thanks, Heather!
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You’re welcome!
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excellent question…
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Thanks.
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Beautiful! I love it vj!
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Thanks so much!
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