Sugar!
Luscious morsels
tantalizing taste buds,
elevating blood counts, craving
sugar!
Sweetness filling
lack, and emotional
high – chocolate as substitute,
sugar…
savour, swallow,
deny empty spaces,
forget no-one ever calls you
Sugar.
(Written for Dark Side of the Moon’s 5-line poem challenge: Β Cinquain Swirl.)
Chocolate is my go-to to sweeten the moment. I think emotional eating can get one in trouble. Life is a balancing act between treating oneself and overindulging. I found this line very sad, “Forget no-one ever calls you.” Part of life for many elderly folks.
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Balancing is hard. I am definitely an emotional eater. No one calls us sweetheart and touch dwindles away.
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My mother calls me “sugar.” π You hit my sweet tooth and my funny bone with that one. π Nicely done!
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Thanks for the prompt. It called for something silly, sweet.
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Ah, sugar, sugar … Oh honey, honey … Better get to the gym, the dentist, the doctor π
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Lol
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π
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Now I need brownies…or the bag of choc chips in the fridge… π
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Lol
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π I resisted only because I was busy writing… π
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God this really resonates especially the line “forget no one ever calls you” sugar is always there as a friend LOL! (not that its really funny π )
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Sometimes we have to laugh at our situation – dark as it may be. Thanks for commenting.
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so true
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Hi Sugar !! Let me introduce myself, I’m Sweet-tooth… !!
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ha ha – me too.
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