Golden
this heart, this plea
no makeshift proposal
I am smitten, hard bitten, sold –
be bold!
Be bold!
say you are sold, also smitten
accept this proposal
this heart, forever
golden.
(A mirror cinquain for Dark Side of the Moon’s weekly challenge. I’ve also worked in the prompts of Fandango (makeshift) and Ragtag Community (bold). Image is from personal collection. A coloured version is available on KnutsonKr8tions at Redbubble.com.)
Mirror cinquain-I learned something new. I imagine it’s a fun challenge to find the words to fit the form.
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It is. I left a link for those who want to join in.
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I like the similarity and diversity of the two parts of your poem. It also has a nice sound and rhythm to it when read aloud. Nicely done!
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Thanks for the prompts Abigail. I enjoy it.
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Beautifully written!!!!.
I love it!
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Thank you!
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Love this! And love the choice of picture for this.
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Thanks Betty. Birds are pairing up all over here. Interesting to see their colour changes and hear the squawking.
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Nicely done indeed–love it!
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Thanks.
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Welcome.
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Very fine wording!
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Thanks
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Love the words… smitten hard bitten
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Thank you!
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