A trill,
a flash of red,
note unmistakeable –
loves echoes scatter through the air
hearts soar…
(Dark Side of the Moon’s weekly challenge is a Crapsey Cinquain. Visit the site to check out the details. Image is from my own collection.)
A trill,
a flash of red,
note unmistakeable –
loves echoes scatter through the air
hearts soar…
(Dark Side of the Moon’s weekly challenge is a Crapsey Cinquain. Visit the site to check out the details. Image is from my own collection.)
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Just perfect!
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Thank you so much.
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Our yard teems with cardinals. I love to listen to them and watch them chase each other around from tree to tree. You captured their love song beautifully.
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I love them too. Even their song is uplifting sight unseen. Thanks Abigail.
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You can hear the trilling! Lovely poem, V.J.
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Thank you, Jade.
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Thanks for sharing the link to information on this poetic form. I love what you’ve done with this one. I am facilitating a writer’s group on Monday and I think I will use this as one of the prompts.
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Good idea! I’m collecting ideas to start a writing circle too.
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Nice lines n lovely image too! ( fits well for spiky squares 🙃)
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Hmmm. Thanks.
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They are such a lovely colour, fit perfectly with loves echoes scattering!
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They are – I found it interesting that they are here in Texas also.
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Best of luck and may wish come true, such a beautiful bird…………
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Aren’t they! Thanks Ivor.
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love echoes scatter through the air – perfect description of their voice.
I’m never certain if they are saying ‘birdie, birdie, birdie’ or ‘pretty, pretty, pretty’ – either way!
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Someone told me they say: ‘love you! love you’.
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Oh, that’s the pinnacle!
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They thrill me too every time I see one 🙂💕❤️
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