Put this corduroy cat out,
give her only fish-eyed dirt –
it is moister than green grass,
less porcelain to devour.
Bleed the soft morning air
See eternity throb
Listen, dance, surround joy
Go! Do young night growl –
delicious, ferocious, wet heart.
(Playing around with Magnetic Poetry online. Want to play along? See what you can make with the words above. Only caveat – you have to use all the words. Photo from personal collection.)
A whimsical play up of words..
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it sure is – thanks.
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such a delightful play of words, I love the use of unusual pairing of words that make more sense than ordinary phrases. this one is really a shadow of the real world we live in. I do like this one very much
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Thanks Gina – it is amazing what comes out of a handful of words.
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I know! but you have assembled them with such flair, I like the way it rolls off my brain as I read them
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I scrapped many attempts before this made the cut. Thanks Gina.
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really? i very seldom edit my writing, its from the notebook I carry around straight to wordpress or wherever else I am writing, I admire the pains you take to create.
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It has to sit with me right before I’ll publish it. You likely have more experience and therefore confidence.
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haha! no experience just very reckless and a little lazy! the crafting of writing is a good point of discussion though, we do need some reflection on some of the poems or prose we write.
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This is challenging! I’ve just being playing around at their site. You did well! I love that you can get kits for your fridge, that could be a whole lot of family fun!
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I had sets for the classroom too. French and English. Fun, and, as you say, challenging.
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